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    在之前的文章中,我们给大家介绍了很多留学申请事宜,今天就接着来给大家讲解一些美国申请的essay写作技巧。大家都知道,想要申请去美国留学是很难的,因为美国作为留学圣地之一,每年都会收到来自世界各地的申请,你的申请如果想要脱颖而出的话,留学申请中的essay可要花心思哦!

  优越论文专家老师已经教会了各位申请者收尾的技巧:1、结尾时综述而非概括;2、进行适当的升华,将自己的观点与一些更加深刻的含义联系起来,使文章充满亮点;3、尽量不要加入全新的的观点。接下来就是对于锻造精彩开头的介绍了。

  1、趣味开头型。在essay的刚开始就用一段有趣的观点、经历等来抓住读者的阅读兴趣是一个不错的选择。

  2引言开头型。文章开头使用一句不同寻常的、深奥的、有趣的引语,但是不要太长。选择的引语应该包含自己希望向录取官表达的某个意思。

  3与众不同型。或者在文章的开头显示出自己与众不同之处,而不是啰嗦地讲一些平淡的事情。

  4巧用描绘型。对于一个人、一个地方或者是一件物品,如果能在文章开头做一个详细的描写,读者在阅读过程中会自然地出现你所描绘的形象的样子,读者更容易被吸引,进入文章深度阅读。

  5巧用悬念型。这个就类似于作文里的制造悬念了,这个可以一用。

  以下是三则美国大学的申请essay开头范文

  【范例1】At my age, few people can genuinely claim that they have had a life-changing experience. After attending Leadership in the Business World (LBW) at the Wharton School last summer, I became one of those fortunate people to have experienced a life-changing academic program. Four weeks of meeting business executives, working with teammates through the night perfecting our professional business plan, experiencing the independence and responsibility that will come with college . . . none of this was advertised in the brochure for LBW, but all of this is what made it uniquely meaningful to me.

  【范文2】Every first Thursday of each month I always look around the Van Muren Hall gymnasium looking at the sixty- and seventy-year-old men and wonder what I am doing there with them. They have lived through world-shaping events like World War II, the Korean War, and the Vietnam War, yet I sit there and interact with them as if there were no differences at all. The reason? We simply share a similar hobby.

  【范文3】

  Only shock prevented the tears from streaming down my face. My cells were dead. After being accepted into the competitive Stanford Institutes of Medicine Summer research Program (SIMr), and spending approximately 170 hours of the past month manipulating human embryonic stem cells (hESCs), I was back to square one-with only one month of my internship remaining. How in the world was I going to make up for lost time?
每年,美国院校都会收到来自世界各地的留学申请,符合院校资格的学生不在少数,你想要让自己的申请脱颖而出得到导师的认可,首先你的申请要出彩,要有能够区别于他人的地方,要有足够的吸引力让导师选择你。所以,essay的写作就显得至关重要啦。今天的知识分享就这些啦,大家还有不懂的记得随时来咨询优越论文专家服务老师哦!

 

 

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